All Comments on 'An Evening with Mistress Eve'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Stupidity runs amok.

That was just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot

I'd love to be the fly on the wall, got me so aroused I almost came. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
pretty good

I like the concept, just the punctuation could be improved a little but overall it was a good read.

EstebanMamonoEstebanMamonoover 7 years ago
structure

more paragraphs, and a new paragraph with every speech line spoken by a different character. Do it and it will be a 5 star story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just sadistic misandry. Non-consensual, no safe word, extreme suspension bondage.

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