by Arking
Had some difficulty to pick up the story where it was left, but oh yeah, Lai was the evil one. But you managed very will to evoke the feeling of seduction, wanting to think that Lai is a strict but caring woman. The whole atmosphere on the ship is one of imminent threat, abhorrent crime and, ... and strong sexual tension, and you manage to convey that very well.
I don’t think people are so more interested in your story after what you have done. It’s time for you to delete your account
Thank you 'Anonymous' for your comment. I find it a strange one. If you so choose to randomly go online and make nonsensical comments, I believe you should have the courage to create an identity to use.
You will note, since my 'coming out' so to speak, I have published part 4 of my ongoing story and will continue to do so. If people choose not to read them, that's fine, but you should now just let me be.
Thank you. [Whoever you are]
This turns my stomach and knowing this is kind of reality is the most aweful thought about this reading ….. yes, no difference between our human past like thousands of years ago and now ….. such a sick greedy world we living in …. So we will see how this play is following the near future
🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫⛓️⛓️⛓️⛓️⛓️⛓️ five guns or chains fitting better then stars