All Comments on 'A Lovers Rendezvous'

Staid.

Read like a police report.

Nothing new.

nice and short but to the point

Is there a story here somewhere?

Wake me up when the story starts.

2*

Barely a story length piece and not very interesting.

Not much story here. The storyline might be worth reading if the details of how they arrived at this point in the relationships and what happens afterwards.

What a load of rubbish. A very poor apology for a tale. Much too short, no characterisation or back story, no emotion, no angst. Unable to relate to either of these people, just a waste of space.

Okay!

3

Really shitty "story". Nothing to it, but you knew we'd have that reaction because thats the same one you got in your previous iterations as well.

Not really any story. Its more a unfinished idea