All Comments on 'An Immodest Proposal'

Very well written and quite erotic tale. When I considered the conversation between the two academics one thought dominated. That nest semester Dr. Morrison will ride Vanessa hard several times and put her away wet. I so enjoy these tales of beautiful young women submitting their bodies in nc/reluctant settings to decades older men. Mind Control is the perfect genre for that and you write it well.

DR Mudd was not the doctor who was there with Lincoln, he fixed John W. Booths leg. If you are going to use someones family in a story get it right.

Thank you DavidCh. I will have that fixed within the next couple of weeks.

Thankfully there is Literotica, so this author can pretend to know something... although he's just ripping off people who made an actual living with this media.