All Comments on 'An Indian Marriage Ch. 06'

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gulshannraygulshannrayover 9 years ago
AN INDIAN MARRIAGE CH . 06

Liked the story all through but the male domination was not appreciated. It is different to pursuade the bride and convince her to fall into the groove gradually than putting some punitive actions and compel the wife to obey under coersion which is not in good taste.

OVERALL THE STORY HAS BEEN GOOD AND IT IS HOPED SOME GOOD SEQUENCES WILL FOLLOW AND THE BRIDE IS BROUGHT INTO A MORE EQUITABLE SITUATION THAN BEING MADE SUBMISSIVE BY COERSION AND THERE BY MAKE THE BOND ENJOYABLE FOR THE BRIDE AS WELL.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
CONFUSED AND NOT PLEASED

I found the story to be exactly what I predicted... Predicable. The poor "bride" in the story lacked personality or even a good thought. I read each chapter praying that the rebellious streak you often mentioned would come through and not be led by a "I'm sorry" or a complete crumble but again another disappointment. I hate how the perception of Indian marriage is written as if she is naive and unsure of the world so she is easy pray for the husband.

overall a decent try but nothing worth reading unless you're into numerous typos, a dull plot and lacking characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Perfect Asian Hot Wife

Beautiful! All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Asian Indian women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly like in the Western world.

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