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Click here"I like you," she said. "And if you can't go back to your home, you're coming with me." She grinned up at him, and his wide eyes made her giggle. Her hand slipped down his arm, walked down the tattoos with her fingertips, and ended in his palm where they slipped between his fingers. "I know the others wi—"
He took her jawline into his fingers, the same as she had him, and kissed her. His was not a tiny kiss; his lasted. He nudged his lips into her, softly, lovingly, and when she saw his closed eyes relaxed with bliss, she just fell into him and did the same. Caution to the wind. She kissed him back, pushed into it harder than he did, and melted all over him like a love sick girl. A teeny tiny Menala voice in her head screamed about how stupid it was to be romantically kissing someone she'd just met, let alone a wild beast, but each passing moment under the rugged man's touch made the voice grow quieter, and quieter, until it was gone.
"I like you too," he said. He nudged his nose against hers, and raised a hand to touch her bottom lip with his thumb.
"Ok... I...." She just stared into his eyes while he caressed her lip. Her breath had vanished, stolen by the perfect kiss, and it took a few moments to find it. "Um. I... ok. More, more kissing later, definitely, when we get back to Sparta... after we find a nearby stream. We need a bath."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoMy 2 cents
I loved the story. 5/5 stars. I liked the way you showed the characters and how they interacted with each other. I will continue to read more of your stories. Thanks for your time and your imagination.
sweetone66over 3 years agoI enjoyed this story very much... not as much as MY LITTLE VENTRUE, but very much indeed! NonHuman stories are my favorite; although only select types. Vampire, were creatures (wolves, big cats etc.), centaur's, human witches and your nightmare entities in Ventrue. I'm really not interested in some of the newer NonHuman stories, but that's just my opinion, and you know what they say about opinions. :D
Keep up the great writing, and again THANK YOU for sharing your time and talent!!!
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis story is amazing!! The characters are well written, the plot is awesome 😊 Please continue the story 🤗.
NovusAnimusabout 5 years agoAuthorIt's a stylistic choice. My stories are supposed to use things like history with a very, very loose, casual approach. I'm sure in Medusa: Fate's Game I use the wrong terminology for a lot of things, but I don't sweat it too much cause hardcore historic details were never what the series was about.
No offense taken. Constructive criticism is good criticism.
Eridonabout 5 years agoSo, I have to say that I love your stories and your style (and especially the shorter man/taller woman, thing that crops up in the other stories). I started reading your stories starting with My Little Ventrue, which I find fantastic, despite the fact that I dislike the New World of Darkness.
But when I moved to the stories such as Medusa: Fate's Game, or this one, I couldn't finish them. For me it is an issue with the stories set in a fantastical Ancient Greece. It isn't a writing issue, or a passing, or a disinterest in these stories. Rather it is incredibly jarring how Un-Greek are the names. It probably isn't an issue at all for someone not versed at all in the naming, and even then some may just ignore it.
Most likely it is more of a me issue than yours. But it breaks the story when I see a "Bob the hoplite" in Sparta instead of Alkaios( actual name of a lyrical poet from Lesbos 7th century BC).
Of course, you are the writer, and I am not demanding anything, but rather I would like to leave this here as something you can consider or not. I hope this doesn't come across as flaming or an attack.
Admiralbird348almost 6 years agoI really liked the story and how you ended it. Not every story needs to go on and on. More diversity this way. Thanks!!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI really enjoyed reading this chapter and hope to see many more! I like the idea of new characters for each chapter but the thought of exploring the characters more in depth is also appealing. I'm eager to see what direction you choose.
It's also too bad centaurs and humans can't breed. I think it would be interesting to see Nevren as an expecting father.
NovusAnimusover 6 years agoAuthorMedusa is coming back, no worries there. There was just a bit of confusion between Laurel and myself, and it got removed. It should be back in a few days, and I'll be submitting all of Medusa (and everything I write) to Literotica as they come. You can find more details in my bio.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI see that you have removed the Medusa chapter, are you not going to release the next chapter on Literotica any more because I see some chapters are already released on patreon.
Thanks
