All Comments on 'An Innocent Connection Pt. 01'

They did and yet they didn't. Enjoyed the main character's set of boundries and yet pushes the envelope. Great fun to read. Well played by the author.

the dialogue play, albeit mental, was light-hearted and innocent yet believable - especially the ease with which the sleeping girls conversed with sam :) and even tho brittany was asleep-ish, methinks she decidedly enjoyed the moment ;) beautifully written - thx for sharing!