All Comments on 'An Innocent Party Game?'

Doesn't sound like a game for old people.

Yes it does

Real bad this. 1* !!

I quite enjoyed the story, it's a good concept, told reasonably well. Wishful thinking is a great author name too, like so many of the literotica stories it is a hopeful fantasy that will likely remain that forever, keep it up fella no harm in a well told fantasy.

Lost all realism for me that the wife was portrayed as such a passionless prude only to turn out to be a slut. To predictable and too many stories of this nature on here.

how would you like me o put my gun in your ass.? I'd put I in your ear but I'd hit nothing

Bravo!!! Let them all fuck Jackie. Can't wait for a follow up. 5*****s

...has already said it.

Entertaining 5 star fantasy.

Hope his life was often filled with hot, enjoyable sex thereafter (from his wife).

Paul in Oklahoma

And you wonder why Britain is no longer a world leader. They seem to have a run on super sluts and worthless cucks. God Save the Queen.

BWahahhaaaa this was such ridiculous trash. But thanks for the laugh.

The author's idea of an innocent game does not match my own.

5 stars! I love a happy ending!

Ruined it with the anal at the end. Should've put more emphasis on Jackie getting her first outside dick hard in her pussy. From prude to anal lover ruined it.

It's a good erotic story but having to continually decipher sentences such as "Jackie responded my removing her and from between her legs and using it to fondle by balls." makes it more difficult to enjoy.