All Comments on 'An Insightful Re-Write'

Thank u for reading this. Wether you're male, female, young or old..u r AWESOME. The last few lines of your "re-write" story were spot on to what i've been thinking about this opportunistic site for years. I've been ready to read a story that just gets to the point of y i'm on this site reading in the 1st place. I actually can't write my own stuff any other way. Now you've inspired me to delve into my mountain of writings and put a few things of my own..here on this half erotic half boring site. By this summer 2O16 I hope to join u in the "skip the bullshit"s highest ranks. Then we can be hated by all these "serious" writers together. Thank u again..u r my inspiration.

On the world wide web. Full of anonymous critics. Get over it.

olal, I enjoyed the stylism of how you wrote this quickie. Sharp and to the point, yet clearly displaying the differing opinions.