by Stella_Omega
Conflicted by how i feel about this story...?
On the one hand it made me a little ill.
But on the other, i felt it was creative and finished reading it not only to see what happened, but was enjoying the writing.
If you have more i for one would check it out.
Nice work Stella, like the interview angle, it will be interesting to see where you take this,
I find the characters interesting. Hoping to see more.
happy. I love this, all of it. It's almost (but not quite) too much, yet it's never really shudder inducing. Instead it's something that requires thought, something that makes my brain tick. I can't wait for the rest!! (And that is really saying something~cuz tentacles are not for me...)
An exceptional read. Fascinating idea. Remarkably interesting world and being you've created. I liked the treatment of starting as an interview - with interesting repercussions!
Your concept is so original and so intreging I want more story to read. I really want to see where this will go.
The story gives a whole new take on pluralism.
What a wonderful juxtaposition: the being who would be so easy to despise as a monster is at the same time the last hope for the desperate.
You have the makings for a much larger story here: the mysteries of attraction and repulsion, the dynamics of the same versus the "Other," and of course, scads of tentacle sex.
I certainly hope that you pursue it.