All Comments on 'An MP Transformed'

Were we supposed to despise Toby at every step of the way? It's funny--I've just read 20 of the Halloween stories, full of vampires and demons and things with tentacles, but Toby was worse than any of them.

Yes, Toby is a extremely hollow nasty piece of work.

More please in this vein. Deeper yet.

Loved it! I would have preferred her to keep her identity and maybe cross the aisle to Toby's party but that's just a personal preference. This is a fantastic story, thank you! 5*

Thanks, I did think about her keeping her identity, but I think Toby wouldn't want that, he would want his own 'creation'.

Excellent work. More to come?

You are very good. Another tale or chapter?

Hi all. I've got a bit of writers block, so I'm hoping to get something done soon.