All Comments on 'An Open Marriage'

10 Big Blazing Stars for Mr. 56543434 for another HOT HOT HOT story. Thank You Sir. Buster2U

Open marriages are dead marriages that haven't realized it yet. Like zombies eventually, they will run out of energy and fall.

1 star. Not my style.

Good for her, she gets fucked. Him, not so much.

ScorpioJJ is right. Their relationship is over. It's just a matter of time.

I guess so. Your number is 25. Mine is 1.

She rushed head-long into the open marriage thing. It would have been more realistic if she had just had one or two guys for awhile, before expanding. What about hubby - what does he get?

Why stay married? Oh yes for convenience to have somebody to fall back on. Out of the three relationships I know who have had an open marriage only one remains married. One divorced the other found her true love and dumped her husband for him. Funny the guy she took off with didn’t have as big a dick as her husband. Damn woman can’t live with them and can’t live without them. Oh the kids just another spit family doing the best the can.

Wanna be slut and her cucky boy

Learn to use tags

Go pound sand

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You think the whore will survive that many men and not get an STD or worse? Terrible idea, terrible story

This story is all one sided for her. Twenty five guys for gangbang. This marriage will be another statistic.

Crap read some this shit story. Get it out of loving wifes.

Totally ridiculous. worse. D

Say goodbye to your kids.

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No way you will be able to keep a normal relationship with them now. You do know it’s illegal for you to include them in your activities until they’re 18, right?

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Yeah, you pretend that’s not your goal, but it’s the goal of the other guys, and you consider it a compliment that guys who have proven they will stick it in any hole will also use your women. I guess they must be reeeeaallly special then.

He’s a loser and an idiot to put up with her.

Shi story with no tags to warn us 1*

Yet another cuck story, it is not good to encourage woman via stories that humiliation of you husband isba good thing !

At the story should have started with the husband getting lots of new pussy first, then the wife. As least there would be some balance to the story !

Just another Cuck and Slut

Just when I thought LW couldn't get any stupider mr56543434 comes along and drops an open bottle of Stupidose into the water! Just sheer gratuitous, mindless, slex (think slut and sex). No plot, no story, just "...look at me, i'm the world's whore!"

Good God, totally ridiculous. This story totally ignores the profound psychological and emotional issues that open marriage blasts to the surface of any relationship. It also totally ignores the issue of attraction - no woman will simply fuck any man who wants her unless she’s getting paid for it or is a complete drug addict, high as a fucking kite. But non-professionals will need at least some attraction and interest, some discretion in order to have multiple partners. Completely indiscriminate gang-bangs? Ain’t happening.

Rw43 says "You do know it’s illegal for you to include them in your activities until they’re 18, right?"

It depends on the country/jurisdiction you are in and that includes all the fictional ones authors dream up on Lit.

Give it up . You are not an author with a story to tell . This latest drivel is more of a masturbatory fantasy , yours maybe ?

Just taking a quick , very quick , look through your blacklist of ' stories ' , it seems for the most part they fit well within one page , rarely making more than that !!

This is not a complaint , merely an observation , although to my view backs up my first statement .

Thanks for allowing readers to comment . That's either big of you , or are criticisms another thing you get off on ?

Wetone85 . 1 * , and I really hurt awarding it .

She will be dead from STDs within a few months. Good riddance.

I would have given her a open marriage by divorcing the fucking slut any bitch that wants to fuck that much doesn't want to be married.

He saw his big fat boss "claim his wife" with his conquest and she mouthed the same.

Sorry bud, she is gone, especially since over 80% of open marriages fail.

What marriage? Sounds like roommates to me. What's the point of marriage if you enjoy fucking others and spending quality time with someone else?

Pathetic!!!!!

Re Anonny re Rw43:

I admit, you're correct. But all countries have an Age of Consent defined by law. In my country, the real sexual act of imagining a fictional sexual act must still follow the Age of Consent laws.

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The World Health Organization recently confused the issue by stating that many young people are emotionally capable of giving Consent while they are yet not legally allowed to. I'm not sure why anyone would say that, since the AoC is intended to protect the child. And unless that capability is uniform, the AoC should not be revised. It is designed to protect ALL children.

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Maybe WHO sees an AoC as a prosperity blocker--that an enforced AoC prevents poor families from marrying off their daughters to wealthy buyers. Who knows anymore? The kiddie lovers have come out of the crypt lately.

My cup of tea I don't understand this one.

Is this written by a African decent individual or a gay guy. And in a open marriage I thought the husband got laid too. I think this is just more humiliation and cockholding. Not open marriage. And personally wife humiliation is not very sexy. And black obsession is mentally ill.

I gave up on this stupid, uninteresting tripe midway through the first page. Don't know what happened - don't care

Dreadful!