All Comments on 'An Ordinary Man's Life Ch. 02'

Hi, I have read both of the english stories and they have a good story line but need a lot of work on the english idoms and vernacular. Look forward to the next installment.

Ron

Perhaps Todd and Samantha will attend the prom after all, but you left us hanging. But then with all the sex between Todd and Andromeda, Todd could be indifferent whether he attended the prom or not.

Great plot--great sex. Thanks for posting.

but it is nearly sickening too lovey dovey