by wordsinthedust
The story keeps getting hotter and hotter. As the story continues, your style keeps getting better. Please go on with additional chapters.
I'm glad to see that you decided to continue this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
One of the most erotic series ever. Will be checking daily for the next chapter(s).
I can not wait for additional parts of this story. I will be also checking daily.
Thanks as it is a very sensual story. Look forward to you including Lisa and other surprises into the story.
Please provide the next chapter soon. This is a very good story with opportunities for some new directions and combonations.
It just keeps getting better and better. Chapter 1 started off nice and slow, and with each chapter, it kept snowballing. Don't know where this train is going, but I'm going to ride it to the end.
This is great! Keep new chapters coming - and soon please!
This is by far your most well written story on Literotica.com.
You are encouraged to extend and expand!!
The way you've described the intimacy of their relationship is amazing. It is one of my favorite stories simply because it feels so natural. You've done an excellent job, please keep up the great work. Thank you!
Outstanding writing...some of the best I've seen in 20 years! Please continue this soon!
The series has been great, so far. The digital camera bit and the Charles bloke in Ch 3 are giving me bad vibes, though, and made it difficult to enjoy this chapter.
it was a good series but chapter three killed the flow and put an evil shadow on the story didn't like the camera part or charles i hope you don't ruin it i hate wasting time on a story only to have the writer totally kill it
Love the slow build up. please write more. This story is so sexy it really gets me going... I want more!
Great plot and writing. Now please finish the next chapters! Thanks!
Looking forward to future chapters with these two. You keep our interest and, at this pace, can sustain this story line for quite a few more chapters. Keep 'em coming.
Great story, I hope you will post the next chapter soon. This story is too good to be left unfinished as it now stands.
One of the most interesting storylines I have seen on the site. Can't wait for more chapters in this series. I have the feeling Lisa, the digital pictures and whomever Charles is will take this story to even higher levels of excitement. Keep up the good work.
I loved your series titled "An Uncomfortable Situation" but it is not finished, and you haven't done anything with it for almost a year. Can you please finish it, wrap up (or unwrap) the series for all of your loyal readers.
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I see I am not alone in the wish for continuing this series. Obviously Lisa is going to have to be more involved, and maybe even the younger sibling, and other of Ali's friends? The combinations could be endless.
Looking forward to more. It really is lovely stroytelling. Great stuff! Julius
Part 3 and 4 are the same. Will Lisa fuck Tommy? What about Lisa's friend joining the group? Will brother and sister end up having a baby and marry and live happy ever after? I want more.