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by Minnie_La_La

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Very enjoyable story!

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muskyboymuskyboy3 months ago

The romance was very good but the Amish angle was way, way off. "Emma experienced the Amish community as an extended member' - there is no such thing, it's an "you're in or you're out" deal 100%. You can be an acquaintance of the Amish, but nothing more. A banished family member is totally shunned. They are very closed communities, very closed. I grew up with them as neighbors. Nice folks, very polite, but very shy as well. The Amish and English mingle in only the very most superficial ways.

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood3 months ago

A beautiful story. Well written. A few spelling mistakes but not enough to make a person stop reading.

WetheNorthWetheNorth3 months ago

Page 4 was horrible writing. The story is good but it is obvious that you took almost no care in proof reading.

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I grew up reading romance novels. So, the genre is dear to my heart. What a great way to escape the unfortunate things in life. My stories have an underlying sweet romance between two people who really make a connection. Of course, my characters are very sensual and powerf...