All Comments on 'An unexpected adventure Pt. 01'

Enjoyed the story even though it's a little predictable. The crazy number of typos and grammar errors was very distracting though. Clean those up and this would be a great story. Looking forward to reading the next week of quarantine.

I liked the story but you need to work on grammar and spelling. Get someone to edit for you.

Again, good story.

Loved your writing style, looking forward to pt. 2

I apologize for the spelling. I tried to get as many as I could but clearly didn’t do a good enough job. I’ll work to improve that next time

A potentially good story totally ruined by nonsensical errors!

"I of course lost so off cake my shirt"

I agree. Great story, but please check your spelling. Sounds petty, but it's hard to get into it when you're constantly trying to figure out what word is supposed to go there.

Great story line, well built up to the climax. The misspelling is understandable and happens to us all.