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Thrillherbrysonabout 2 years agoImmaculate 1st Story!
I can't put into words how amazing this story is. I can't believe this is your 1st story
Lovecraft_Loreabout 2 years ago5 stars
Orc sex is best sex. Too bad he didn't kill anyone with an arrow.
WitchyWriterabout 2 years agoAuthorThank you for your feedback! I was very nervous as this is my first story. There is definitely more to their story. Possibly a third chapter as well.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI love this story! Please continue! And I like that the orc is a sweetheart! ❤❤❤
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoMy only criticism is that you abruptly switched perspectives from her to I, halfway through the story. Other than that this was great!
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI love this story! I hope you keep writing. I like the gentle twist on orc behaviour. :)
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