All Comments on 'An Unexpected Christmas Romance'

Yeah!!!! Great story!!!!!

The magic of Christmas!

5

Another amazing upgrade to an amazing story. I love your particular twist on it. Bravo!

A GREAT STORY AND WAITING FOR ANOTHER. GOOD LUCK AND I WILL BE WAITING.

Merry Christmas, everyone.

Great story, but spoiled by constant change of perspective - sometimes Shane said.... Sometimes I said....

and tense - sometimes present, sometimes past.

I think an editor may be of assistance.

great story

And you wonder why I think you are a great writer, this type of story is the reason. It's fun, sexy, and romantic with your superb sense of morality. These qualities are rare for most writers but you make it so enjoyable. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

A bit too Cinderella for my taste.

They don't have a lot in common in terms of age, background, education, income...except lust.I

Yes, she has big tots, but there is more to love than that.

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Very Sweet und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Tx for the sweet story.

That Mary is actually not to his liking and he's always at work, making him not much of a partner to Mary, is a bit of an lazy setting though. I would hope the reasons for the lovers to fall for each other were not that cheap.

Less important, but still a bit of a bummer:

How can her breasts be pushing into his chest when they dance? You said Nadia's a good head smaller than Shane. Does she have a push up bra holding her boobs in front of her face? And then she uses her face to push her breasts into his chest?

If her boobs are really that big, which i hope, they would even reach her own chest, without a very pushy push up bra!