All Comments on 'An Unexpected Distraction Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good story, but the “aaaaarrroooo!”s are killing the mood. It makes me think of cartoon characters, like the Jetson’s dog.

racfguyracfguyover 1 year ago

A gray suit and brown shoes?

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