All Comments on 'An Unexpected Distraction Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Three out of five stars. Two star off for the unnecessary bullshit drama at the end with joe and katie. Jealousy from joe at the skill Steven had and pure stupidity from katie. Steven literally set this whole thing up and he gets insulted like that just because he is a good at batting and fielding?

Come on, it wasn’t like it was Theresa’s try out for the team that Steven messed up. Feels rather shallow that he got shitted on like this. Maybe he needs to kick Theresa and her family to the curb, if every time a hidden skill he has is unveiled and they get mad and expect he apologize.

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