All Comments on 'An Unexpected Education Pt. 03'

Enjoyed your story, looking forward to next episode.

You have a real problem with knowing how to use basic punctuation. Sentence construction is another problem: " Why had it made her feel so good and, more importantly?" That is not a sentence. There should be a comma after "importantly."

Sorry, but there are so many mistakes of all kinds here I can't begin to list them all.

Thank you for the nice comment. I don't intend to write anything else on this characters for now. This was my first try at writing. I am currently working on a story for the April Fools contest.

I appreciate your comment. Even negative comments help me grow. I am learning more and more about handling dialogue and being better with punctuation. The "?" mark was a goof, but thanks for showing it to me. Bare with me, in time I will get better, but i'm good enough now to post stuff for people to read and enjoy and that makes me happy.