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"You will cum for me now!" he commanded her. He pulled back then drove his cock even deeper inside her. He wanted his words to have weight. He watched as she simply exploded. Her body convulsed around his hard shaft as he continued to claim her. He felt her shake with each wave of her orgasm. Her tight little pussy squeezed him even harder.
It all drove him over the edge as well. His voice loud as he called out "I'm Cumming!" As he screamed, he filled her little twat with his own liquid fire. With each deep thrust, he pumped more of it inside her. The sounds of their shared pleasure filled the room. Both bodies rocked together and they both continued to climax.
Completely spent, they collapsed against the couch. Desi looked down at the two of them. It was evident in her face, that she had totally enjoyed the spectacle of it.
With all three of them exhausted, they were sprawled on the couch is a heap of bodies. Desi grinned at both of them as she spoke: "So Liz, when is your next assignment?" They all laughed at her comment then snuggled tighter against each other in post-sex bliss.
After tonight it was obvious, they all would be even closer friends.
- COMMENTS
ShaynMackenzieabout 5 years agoAuthorI appreciate your comment. Even negative comments help me grow. I am learning more and more about handling dialogue and being better with punctuation. The "?" mark was a goof, but thanks for showing it to me. Bare with me, in time I will get better, but i'm good enough now to post stuff for people to read and enjoy and that makes me happy.
ShaynMackenzieabout 5 years agoAuthorThank you for the nice comment. I don't intend to write anything else on this characters for now. This was my first try at writing. I am currently working on a story for the April Fools contest.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoYou have a real problem with knowing how to use basic punctuation. Sentence construction is another problem: " Why had it made her feel so good and, more importantly?" That is not a sentence. There should be a comma after "importantly."
Sorry, but there are so many mistakes of all kinds here I can't begin to list them all.
