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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Not at all what I normally like, but the pacing and action was so hot.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex. Adding a father makes it so much better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Vincent fell short

It was naturally the next step in the story after she opened up her legs and Paul went to sleep. Vincent had to fill the Void.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More, more,more

Please you have to continue the story. Vince must be hungry the next day, maybe he could sneak back after Paul leaves for work. This time Shikha could welcome him home in more ways than one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

NEEDS A PART 2 it ended to quickly

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Hello there, I am an Indian and also currently living in India. I am an ardent fan and also a voracious reader of romantic fiction. And this is my first attempt at writing erotica. Hopefully, you will enjoy reading my submissions here. Looking forward to your feedback and c...