All Comments on 'An Unexpected Evening Pt. 01'

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rentturtlerentturtle10 months ago

This was a good start. Continue by slowing some of it down. He agrees to all of this very quickly without any natural struggle and he clearly isn't a natural or obvious submissive. I'm curious about the characters though.

SirKevinSirKevin9 months ago

Abrupt ending, but I enjoyed what was there. Curious about what's going on in his head, since this seems new to him, as well as the other characters. Looking forward to more

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