All Comments on 'An Unexpected Journey'

great ... keep it going.....

Wow! What a great first story. So patient and descriptive. There were a few typos and tense changes, so be more careful on the next chapter, which I can’t wait for. 5 stars out of the gates for you!

Excellent writing and theme!! Keep going you know how to excite!!

While not a particular fan of the cuck scene I find your story delightful. I am always interested in a woman willing to do what is necessary to get what she wants sexually, and this story seems to be headed in exactly that direction. I await the next chapter eagerly.

Damn.

Belongs in Interracial Love section obviously

If people are interested, I'll start working on part two

On Baby!!! You go girl, getting yourself, the young man, and me all worked up!!! I'm truly looking for the next chapter of this saga!!! Love a beautiful MILF determined to get herself well fucked!!! 5- Stars, and I'd have gone 6 if they were availble!!

Lou Boutin's...no.. Louboutin. One word. But otherwise good start. Only I don't see the strong cuck connection to mom son jump. And he's not back so that's doesn't make the connection either. Would make more sense if watch mom son porn or if he was black amd dead dead was too or something. Idk. Anyway good build-up otherwise

Great story, loving it. I'm excited for a part two.

Part 2 please?!?!?!?!?!?!?

You have my attention.... Part 2 or more.

Excellent. Please continue. Mom in control. Teasing and seducing the son. I sense humiliation is also going to happen. Can’t wait for the next part.

I'm loving where it started!~<3 I'm honestly a little jealous of the son at this point.

Was loving the story until it ended too soon. Looking forward to more

cant wait for next chaoter

Next chapter please. Can’t wait to see how she springs the trap.

10/10. Can't wait for the next chapter! Quite curious to see how she cucks him.

Great build up and finishes on a real tease leaving us hanging in suspense.

Come on it is time to turn the page.

What to say? The story was going along fine and then it ended, no indication for a continuance like, "Chapter two coming soon!" or whatever people put at the end of their chapter. This was posted 8/29, so what are we to think, an unfinished story? I gave it 5 stars but was that too much?

Heys guys working on the update, been busy and have a hard time finding private time to write, but Marie and Robert will continue their journey

Incomplete

Ooh this deserves a second chapter