All Comments on 'An Unexpected Journey Ch. 02'

Your writing certainly carries the reader along. Makes me want and hold my breath. Very well done, enjoying it very much. ~teddybear

wow, what a great story. i cannot wait to read more of her journey and the adventures that i am sure await her. the suspense is wonderful. thank you for sharing your talents here.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This is a damn good read. You have a very creative mind and a wonderful writer.

This is great! :)

very interesting so far. But i do hope that she is Master Jone's only serving mate ;) lol

Please continue right away :)

All I can say is when is Chapter 3 coming out? *grins*

Great story, keep it coming. ~FMG