All Comments on 'An Unexpected Night'

by Sugary_Comfort

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maineman4umaineman4uover 12 years ago
Sex in a vehicle is...

....always exhilarating. What a terrific prelude? Fine foreplay. Excellent action. And he gets a "reward" at the end!

You write extremely well grammatically, spelling-wise, content and overall style. Wish you had written additional chapters (or are they in the pipe-line?).

Sugary_ComfortSugary_Comfortover 12 years agoAuthor
To MaineMan4U

This piece is just a stand alone thing. But I had thought a long time ago about using Kara for other little erotic coupling stories. I'll have to dig around in my memory and find something else to write with her. I used something that happened to me to create this story and then I added the sex. I'm sure there are plenty of other things that have happened to me that I could twist around so that sex happens.

If I write something else, I'll contact you.

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