All Comments on 'An Unexpected Romance Ch. 001-022'

That was a crappy ending. I hope there is more to come from this story.

I liked it enough to wait a bit for the next part. The setup was needed.

bigbob... it's not the end since it has a chapter marker on it! (well, it would be a pretty lousy place to leave it!).

My apologies. I obviously wasn't paying enough attention.

I am looking forward to reading more!!!!

This is excellent. I was disappointed when you stopped the story. GIMME MORE!!!!

Please?

THANKS

You clearly know very little about baseball. Keep details to a minimum about something you are not well versed in.

Outstanding.! More, more

I'll give the next part a chance, but no promises after that.

I like the premise of the story and the characters as they are developing, but the flow is to "jerky" with the needless chapter breaks disrupting the continuity and the frequent changes in scene/perspective.

Nice. A bit creepy, but not as creepy as i. Tx