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sjohns219sjohns219over 2 years ago
Thanks

Thank you for the story. I enjoyedit thoroughly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A thoroughly enjoyable feel good story. Thank you.

Tckurtz1Tckurtz1over 2 years ago

This was a great story...Very well done.

Sxualchocol8Sxualchocol8over 2 years ago

Aw man! Ya made me cry.... You've spun a fantastic tale; loveable characters, believable plot (3 threads, huh?) And a conceivable ending. Very well rounded story. Great job.

Sc8

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

GREAT STORY. HOPE TO SEE MORE . TYVM

arrowglassarrowglassover 2 years ago
Totally awesome story!

A favorite tale ends well!!!!

RRC2RRC2over 2 years ago

Excellent. I loved every word.

THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was a good bark !

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story very well written.

eightytuneseightytunesover 2 years ago

a proud man who was blessed to play the game and have a family to love. 5 STARS.

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 2 years ago

As a Brit Baseball stats etc mean nothing to me, but this was a love story about family with a side order of baseball to give it a bit more meaning, and it completely succeeded imho, a great story with very real characters, I’d have liked to have heard a bit more of how Angela #1 got on building her herd and how it settled into the new ranch etc, but that’s just me. 5/5 Thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow, and thanks! ☆☆☆☆☆

NevermyloveNevermylovealmost 2 years ago

There is not a more captivating love story!

oldgraycatoldgraycatover 1 year ago

OMG What a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolutely amazing story. Had my eyes a little wet at the end. That almost NEVER happens.

This author should be writing for Harlequin!

Great job ajroye. Keep ‘em coming

MisterKnickersMisterKnickersover 1 year ago

I loved this story.

Keep them coming AJRoye

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Started ok. Lost the plot and started a long senseless rambli g. Nobody speaks, they all bark and yelp. Dumb

HassieHassie6 months ago

Loved it. .its the type of story that I appreciate.

Write more like this. Thanks

dutchcan2dutchcan2about 2 months ago

Loved it I read through it in one day ( helps to be retired and not able to do much anymore ) the story was great it realy shows what we can acomplish when we take the time to help others just because we can the rewards are much greater when we help others without any expectedd return.

I note that the only negative comment comes from anonymus and shows his inteligence by commenting on how others may express them selves I will be looking at more of this authors stories

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Retired male, married 40+ years, grandfather ... writin' about what could have been, when I was much... much younger. If only I'd... I read comments, but don't reply. 4/11/2021 My submissions are fantasy. If the reader finds a situation unbelievable, then... Fantasy. 11/6/...

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