by ajroye
Aw man! Ya made me cry.... You've spun a fantastic tale; loveable characters, believable plot (3 threads, huh?) And a conceivable ending. Very well rounded story. Great job.
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a proud man who was blessed to play the game and have a family to love. 5 STARS.
As a Brit Baseball stats etc mean nothing to me, but this was a love story about family with a side order of baseball to give it a bit more meaning, and it completely succeeded imho, a great story with very real characters, I’d have liked to have heard a bit more of how Angela #1 got on building her herd and how it settled into the new ranch etc, but that’s just me. 5/5 Thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.
Absolutely amazing story. Had my eyes a little wet at the end. That almost NEVER happens.
This author should be writing for Harlequin!
Great job ajroye. Keep ‘em coming
Started ok. Lost the plot and started a long senseless rambli g. Nobody speaks, they all bark and yelp. Dumb
Loved it I read through it in one day ( helps to be retired and not able to do much anymore ) the story was great it realy shows what we can acomplish when we take the time to help others just because we can the rewards are much greater when we help others without any expectedd return.
I note that the only negative comment comes from anonymus and shows his inteligence by commenting on how others may express them selves I will be looking at more of this authors stories