All Comments on 'An Unexpected Shift Ch. 02'

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Exhale SlowlyExhale Slowlyalmost 19 years ago
Fascinating story

That was very hot. Thank you for sharing this fantastic story.

glynndahglynndahabout 17 years ago
Discipline and Control ...

This story showed the relationship between the 2 characters as one of discipline and control, but it never veered over into cruelty. A fine line to walk and you did a superb job. This story, a bubble bath and a bit of time and I'm set for the evening.

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