All Comments on 'An Unexpected Submissive - 05'

Don't tell him? He doesn't have to! You'd have to be blind not to see it. Even the two people who are afraid to admit it can see it. Looking forward to when they finally decide to fess up and tell one another. Love this story!

I still stand on what i said last chapter. Trust us the basis on the bdsm relationship and honesty do why is he not opening up to his sub in the same way he expects from him? I still don't know how long they have left. A cue as to the time left at the point of each chapter would help. I liked the scene and how he got naked but the contrast of hiding his feelings despite bearing his body was effective.

Oh, damn – so sexy, so wonderful!

For me this was an amazing and arousing story. As one who has just started exploring "mild" BDSM, I can embrace the beautifully stated emotions and physical reactions of the kind of exhibitionist scene you described. The ending was a bit heart-breaking. Hopefully, the deep love encountered between these two can be revealed so they can explore the depths of the sexual energy they share!

Amazing. Breathlessly waiting for the next chapter! Thank you!

The tension is so high and fantastic. The glimpses of Grey’s insecurities are fascinating. So beautifully written.

I do not usually start a story unless it is complete. I made an exception for this one… so pleeeeeeeeease, I am begging of you, do not take too long to post the remaining chapters. 😔

I wasn’t aware that this story isn’t yet complete when I first started reading it, and now I’m addicted to the world you’ve created through your impeccable writing and marvelous storytelling.

I could easily imagine this to become a book series.

The language used in the intimate scenes aren’t vulgar or in any way inappropriate for an erotic book on the line of the 'fifty shades of grey' trilogy. Which i actually found less interesting than yours. The small part of the first 'fifty shades' book I read was more pornographic and used adolescent phrases (for instance when describing body parts) which does not appeal to me.

Your writing feels a lot more sincere and deep, and that comes through with a much more “complete” story. One that has so much more to offer than “just” sex and BDSM.

I would absolutely love to see this as an actual physical book on the shelves of my bookstore.

Taking into consideration the many controversial elements it contains and the possible conversations and debates such a book would gift the world with, it would be nearly a crime not to make it happen 😉♥️

This is the best dom/sub story I have read anywhere. The way Grey physically and emotionally cares for Alex is incredibly erotic and fits my fantasy of what a dom/sub relationship should be like. So many stories confuse humiliation for submission. IMO, they are not the same. This story is also the best explanation on the use of safe words. Can't wait for the next chapter!