by Thatonegirl101
Interesting characters, it did move a little quickly but I still would like to hear more :)
GREAT first try. and yes this is too short, but i cant wait for the next installment.
its a bit short but a very good beginning. please keep it coming
I know its a bit short but its only the first chapter I promise the second will be a lot longer. I am just about done writing it. it should be out soon (:
thanks so much for your support any comments welcome
thatonegirl.
nice start, the plot is a well used one, however that being said, it is a plot that works and never gets old. I can't wait to see where this story goes
I liked it, nice start. It kinda was fast paced, but there is great potential here. (:
great start...look forward to more. it'd probably help her be okay with staying there if she remembers more of the attack when the vamp said, 'i've been watching you for a while.'
I liked the story so far. You may want to slow down the progression of the story line to develop characters some more. Keep writing.
I like the first chapter and am waitng to see what happens next. Please write soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter, because this story was fabolous!=D
amazing start cant wait to see what else you have in store for us......please update this story soon
I am glad you guys liked my story. My life caught up with me and i didn't get to write that much. But i have decided to start now and see where it takes me thanks for your patience :) chapter 2 will be up soon. bare with me!!!!