by Thatonegirl101
I am glad you guys liked my story. My life caught up with me and i didn't get to write that much. But i have decided to start now and see where it takes me thanks for your patience :) chapter 2 will be up soon. bare with me!!!!
amazing start cant wait to see what else you have in store for us......please update this story soon
I can't wait for the next chapter, because this story was fabolous!=D
I like the first chapter and am waitng to see what happens next. Please write soon.
I liked the story so far. You may want to slow down the progression of the story line to develop characters some more. Keep writing.
great start...look forward to more. it'd probably help her be okay with staying there if she remembers more of the attack when the vamp said, 'i've been watching you for a while.'
I liked it, nice start. It kinda was fast paced, but there is great potential here. (:
nice start, the plot is a well used one, however that being said, it is a plot that works and never gets old. I can't wait to see where this story goes
I know its a bit short but its only the first chapter I promise the second will be a lot longer. I am just about done writing it. it should be out soon (:
thanks so much for your support any comments welcome
thatonegirl.
its a bit short but a very good beginning. please keep it coming
GREAT first try. and yes this is too short, but i cant wait for the next installment.
Interesting characters, it did move a little quickly but I still would like to hear more :)