All Comments on 'An Unexpected Type Of Love'

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Thatonegirl101Thatonegirl101over 11 years agoAuthor
Working on chapter now

I am glad you guys liked my story. My life caught up with me and i didn't get to write that much. But i have decided to start now and see where it takes me thanks for your patience :) chapter 2 will be up soon. bare with me!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

amazing start cant wait to see what else you have in store for us......please update this story soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Can't wait!

I can't wait for the next chapter, because this story was fabolous!=D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
waiting for next chapter

I like the first chapter and am waitng to see what happens next. Please write soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good start...

I liked the story so far. You may want to slow down the progression of the story line to develop characters some more. Keep writing.

AyamiAyamiover 13 years ago
more please

cant wait for more to come

canndcanndover 13 years ago

great start...look forward to more. it'd probably help her be okay with staying there if she remembers more of the attack when the vamp said, 'i've been watching you for a while.'

farrahkellifarrahkelliover 13 years ago
Good Start.

I liked it, nice start. It kinda was fast paced, but there is great potential here. (:

freakgirl1134freakgirl1134over 13 years ago
great start!

I cant wait to read the rest :)

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 13 years ago
nice

nice start, the plot is a well used one, however that being said, it is a plot that works and never gets old. I can't wait to see where this story goes

Thatonegirl101Thatonegirl101over 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I know its a bit short but its only the first chapter I promise the second will be a lot longer. I am just about done writing it. it should be out soon (:

thanks so much for your support any comments welcome

thatonegirl.

missymoemissymoeover 13 years ago
keep it coming

its a bit short but a very good beginning. please keep it coming

mariasmdmariasmdover 13 years ago
good job...

GREAT first try. and yes this is too short, but i cant wait for the next installment.

zouzounizouzouniover 13 years ago
A good start

Interesting characters, it did move a little quickly but I still would like to hear more :)

misstrshmisstrshover 13 years ago

good but tooshort

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