All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Family Vacation'

I normally don't put down an author but just couldn't avoid it this time. The story was rated a 5 when I read it which makes no sense. It will surely drop once people start reading it.

Too many problems for me to list so I will let others point things out. The one big error that stands out is that this story is in the wrong category. It should have been in Incest not in First Time.

Better luck next time.

English is not the writer's first language, that is obvious. A good translator to English is needed. It's unreadable to me, an English speaker.