All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Trip'

I thought this had to be from a long list of previous writings but see it us your first, at least on here. Congratulations. Perceptive insights into your female lead character's psyche. Some continuity bugs need ironing out, and the story clearly isn't finished yet. Hope it will be.

Your words are most encouraging. I'll keep your advice in mind and ensure more continuity in subsequent stories. Thank you very much.

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