All Comments on 'An Unhappy Reunion Pt. 03'

Do you mean there's going to be more to come?

I hope there is.

Another good story and I enjoyed it!

Glad to see you continuing this store. Can't wait for part 4

Keep going!!

Linn ear

I'm glad you add more to this series, it seemed like there was more. My only complaint is in a couple places you said John instead of Dave. I'm looking forward to how you end this story

The twins are the dumbest bitches in the world. They have been told by everyone to stay away from the fucking jerkoff but nooooo they want to be in a position where they can be hurt and not get away from him. Until he gets back on an even keel being a friend is good fucking being tied up and fucking him is not.

Very nice addition. Would love to see where you take it from here.

Damn, you always write the best stories. I'd forgotten about this, it being so long since part 2. 5 BIG MAD STARS! lol

I have read 19 pages of drivel. Please put us out of our misery and STOP this thing - not a story, a fairy tale.

Has become really boring. Superman Daver services 10 women at once, and rules the world. John is a disgusting character.

This feels like a mixture of The Rescuer and Sad Son.

Seriously who is Kira? She was Kara for 2 and a half chapters and turned to Kira. First half of story good then turned to shit

Also the girls are not twins. Stop writing that they are. Read page 1 of the first chapter. They are 1 year apart

Stopped reading at page 1. 4 manipulative bitches just ruined the ENTIRE series.

Hung in through the manipulative work women, and the Kara name change. But putting her and Lisa with John was utterly disappointing. A P.O.S. like him doesn't deserve them. What a shame that the first 2 chapters got railroaded by this one.

I was more disappointed in Jane in this chapter than anything else. She went from a nice, demure young woman to an entitled, manipulative blabbermouth as soon as she moved into Dave’s house. She invited several women from Dave’s office to Dave’s house for a cookout party. Oh, a NUDE party, with sexy party games. Without asking Dave. And to make matters worse, she got drunk, ran off at the mouth, and told, indirectly but still told. all those same women that Dave was screwing his sisters. Boy, with friends like her….

There were a couple of other things I didn’t much care for in this chapter but Jane’s behavior pretty much tanked it for me. Too bad, too, as I liked the first two chapters.

Jane would have been out the door for a few reasons she clearly showed she doesn't love him just used him and 2 for running her slut mouth that can land him and his sisters in serious trouble how is that caring and loving someone and how is that a friend all you have done is try to hype him up just to show is nothing but a fucking pussy a damn coward allowing him to be controlled just by a few words from a damn whore

I have to agree with mfkndragon for the most part Jane should have been out on her ass for running her mouth about something she knew damn well she should have kept her damn mouth shut about that could have gotten him into some serious trouble with the law as well as his sisters if they admit to the truth and not scream rape so yeah she clearly doesn't love him and only cares about herself so again mfkndragon is correct you spent all that time hyping him up to just to show that he is a coward and a pathetic little cuck

1 more thing as others has stated it did seem like Jane turned into a self ignorent and intilted bitch who will do anything to get what she wants again it's all about her and to hell with anyone else some say she got drunk and told indirectly he was fucking his sisters as well however I don't believe it was a accident I think she told them on purpose and then told them to use that against him to make him fall in line and she will keep using it against him while she fucks other guys and probably fuck them in front of him as I said he's a coward a fucking pathetic little cuck bitch he damn sure ain't no man

LOVE this story! 5 stars for All . DMW aka

Where did this thing about Lisa and Kira being twins come from? In the first chapter it was said that Lisa was a year older than Kara

Some flaws as already mentioned but still worth reading

Yea, John deserves nothing why is he getting 2 girls, just for having PTSD. Wqs quite the disappointment