All Comments on 'An Unhealthy Fixation'

Great story. AAAAAA+++++

Very good story!

5

Nice, sexy, murder mystery.

I normally give you 5*, but this time it was 2. I normally love your stories. There is absolutely no romance in this. The murderer confessed to easily. The story was more irritating than entertaining. If it was in non-erotic and a little more effort was made in the investigation/prosecution, it would've been much better. Another option would've been to have her still alive and trying to avoid firing/jail for allegedly having sex with an underage student.

No signed model release but this "businessman" released it anyway? Not believable, but the story was good enough to suspend disbelief. 5/5!!

Incompetent coroner, when one is smothered, the teeth leave an imprint on the lips.

I usually like your stories. Not this one. This was not a romance at all. I wonder how many readers had to look up the term “stat dec”.

When people are smothered the eyes display Petechial hemorrhaging. Blood vessels in the eyes burst. That would be obvious in any forensic examination. Good story. Could have been less rushed.