All Comments on 'An Unlikely Hero'

Please don't leave it there,part 2 needed

Great story, keep it going.

Really good story, I think a bit more reluctance on her part would sell it but that's personal preference. Would be interesting to see what direction you take this one.

Hope she gives Hollis a baby.

Just about as unrealistic as anything I've ever read.

Very good start. Hope to see Sara continue to enjoy Hollis but continue with her studies until she’s pregnant

Thank you for your stories. I hope you have a part 2. Poor Sara subjected to his desires and submitting to him more and more.

Hot Hot....

Not really my thing... probably more "NonConsent/Reluctance" than "Interracial Love"...

I like it! More of this, please!

"night dress did little to conceal an enormous pair of bullet-shaped breasts that sagged nearly to her waist." Thanks

continue the story a great work, look forward to seeing where these lead to in your mind..

Excellent story, couldn't stop reading. I also told a few of my older Black friends to read it. Through this story they can also dream one day of maybe getting lucky and having their young white girl dream come true. Thanks.

I want to see where this goes I enjoyed it

Great story just a little more reluctance from her but would like to see how things turned out keep going over all great job

the built up is to long compared to the sex at the end

where's the next part? wanna read it ASAP!

It excites me to think that Sarah will be conquered by the lust of an old black man, and that she will have children, and she will have children, and she will continue to have children, and she will grow old as a slave to the elderly. I'm just sad that I can't be Sarah serving in the arms of a sweaty old black man.

Where's the next part? It's been so long

Brilliant, loved it please write more