All Comments on 'An unOrthodox Christmas'

Wow! The weirdest group of connected short stories I've ever read. Blew my mind! You are an artist with great imagination. The holiday theme wrapped around a mafia family business. I'm just glad that nobody died.

Well... someone did die, offscreen. Lol.

A rejected version of the third tale featured two horridly graphic (but well-deserved) deaths. I liked the radio station idea better.

Even gangsters need the Holidays. Happy Thanksgiving, and merry xmas. Fun stories, thank you for them. Five stars.

“She loved it when men took pleasure in her body…”

Your repeatedly referencing how happy prostitutes are with their work, and how sexually excited they get around johns, is evidence that you’ve never spent time with actual sex workers. Their romanticizing their lives does both the real women and your story a serious disservice.

Yes. It's called "fiction."