All Comments on 'An Unusual Beginning Ch. 06'

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TestUser0815TestUser0815over 1 year ago

There should be a separate category for black women and white man because interracial should mean black man white women exclusively (like it is in reality). Most people prefer bid dick, pink pussy good sex over little dick, brown pussy bad sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent chapter, well done. Please ignore the low rent scum who comment below, his envy is telling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice story. I know everyone gets busy, but wish chapter's weren't so far in between.

MelletoniaMelletoniaover 1 year ago

I am really invested in this story. It has great potential. I have been checking weekly for the new chapter. I must say it was anticlimactic. Diane is getting way too much attention. Focus more on the relationship with Arlene and David. Their evolving relationship needs to be highlighted. There is so much to develop there. Build on their attraction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Since I read the original story. I am looking forward to seeing how this story turns out. Ms. don't for Zachary and Ciara on here as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. After reading the original story of Arlene and David. looking forward to reading the changes.

6King6King4 months ago

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