All Comments on 'An Unusual Gift Ch. 05'

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I don't like where this is going. It's his collar and yet he's in the losing position here, feel femdom vibes.

@RiseOne

Maybe for a chapter or two, but he won't lose control for long ;)

For her being his best friend, she doesn’t act like it.

I can't wait to read more of this fantastic story @PTWrites ! There's nothing wrong with a sexually liberated friend slipping some harmless & sexy erotic mind control into the mix. Just because a woman is having some fun taking the lead for a while doesn't mean it's got to be the all pain & masochism. The kind of sexy woman who enjoys mind control with her friend is also the kind who likes getting dominated herself now & then. ;-)

Love the series so far!

Very good.

I usually don't read mind control stories. Because they rob the submissive of his individuality, turning him into a mindless puppet. But I love the work you have done. I love the ability to keep the personality submissive. I hope it will be used more often in the future so that we can hear discontent and indignation(Like reluctant). And even more I like the idea of implanting orders and controlling physiological reactions(Like orgasm and excitement). It sparks my own imagination:

You can make Jack produce several times more sperm when ejaculating. You can force one of the girls to lactate. You can arrange the perfect pet play or age play(But no diapers please). You can cause severe salivation and dripping of the pussy at the sight of the penis. Or profuse sweating. These body functions are mostly controlled by the brain. And considering that in the first chapter you promised a transformation, can go even further.

Femdom vibes look good, but I'm glad you're going to take control back to Jack. I hope he will pay back Abby for the manipulation attempt)

Looking forward to new chapters.

First off I quiet like this story, you are a really good writer and I hope there is loads more to come.

One thing I don't like, and I see from your comments it's temporary, was her manipulation of his mind. Sure it's femdommy but for me it's more it destorys the trusting relationship they have. Yes they control and tease each other but what's been very clear in the previous chapters is that they have a great friendship and trust and I don't seeing that destroyed. Hope that comes back too from what you have hinted at.

I really like the story, but Abby is quite fucked up. First she Nonconsentedly makes her best STRAIGHT friend get sucked off by a guy, then she secretly forces him to wear the collar whenever she tells him too. thats no consentual and that sure as hell isnt how you treat your best freind who trusted you with the secret of the collar to begin with.