An Unusual Gift Ch. 05

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"So, it's just stroking it that's different. Sucking it still feels good?" She asked and Jack nodded in response. Abby gripped his cock, rubbing her thumb firmly along the now slick underside of his swollen cock head that would usually be quite sensitive. She continued to tease him in every way she knew with her hand for another twenty minutes. Then she put his cock away and waited. She grinned when they heard Ava's key in the door.

It was a good job Abby had told him to sit quietly otherwise Jack would have screamed as pleasure overwhelmed his senses. It was almost painful how much pleasure burst from his cock as he came hard, filling his boxers for the second time. His hips bucked, thrusting into some imaginary person as he gripped the sofa, his knuckles white. His legs kicked and jerked and he suddenly went limp as he passed out momentarily. He came round just as Ava entered the room.

"Did I make you jump?" Ava asked, noticing his sudden jerky movement. Jack didn't reply, just looking at her as Abby's command kept him quiet. Although his brain was barely functioning at this point.

"Answer her," Abby told him quickly, slapping him playfully on the arm.

"Sorry, yeah I must have dozed off," he answered quickly.

"Right," Ava replied, not quite believing him and pretending not to notice the bulge in his pants. She figured they'd be doing something when she walked in, despite her purposefully giving them warning of how long she would be. She decided leaving was the best option and retreated to her bedroom.

"You can talk again now," Abby told him.

"Did I pass out?" Jack asked.

"Yeah, was it that intense?"

"Yeah, I can't describe it, hell I barely remember it. I just remember an intense amount of pleasure and my vision going white. Next thing I know was Ava talking to me."

"Wow, it's amazing how much control that collar gives. Like being able to control what you physically feel, that's insane."

"I think we should be careful with that, who knows what would happen if you overloaded my brain or something."

"True. We'll just have to take it slow."

"Well, I will. I'm never letting you put this collar on me again."

"We'll see about that," Abby replied, hiding her smile.

"We won't."

"Yeah well, we're going out with Ava tonight and that collar doesn't come off until almost one in the morning. I've still got plenty of time to mess with you."

"I thought we were even now?" Jack groaned.

"Oh we are, now it's just time for me to have some fun."

"Great, I can't wait to see what you come up with," Jack replied sarcastically.

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Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor10 months ago

I really like the story, but Abby is quite fucked up. First she Nonconsentedly makes her best STRAIGHT friend get sucked off by a guy, then she secretly forces him to wear the collar whenever she tells him too. thats no consentual and that sure as hell isnt how you treat your best freind who trusted you with the secret of the collar to begin with.

ShadowmanxxxShadowmanxxxover 2 years ago

First off I quiet like this story, you are a really good writer and I hope there is loads more to come.

One thing I don't like, and I see from your comments it's temporary, was her manipulation of his mind. Sure it's femdommy but for me it's more it destorys the trusting relationship they have. Yes they control and tease each other but what's been very clear in the previous chapters is that they have a great friendship and trust and I don't seeing that destroyed. Hope that comes back too from what you have hinted at.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good.

I usually don't read mind control stories. Because they rob the submissive of his individuality, turning him into a mindless puppet. But I love the work you have done. I love the ability to keep the personality submissive. I hope it will be used more often in the future so that we can hear discontent and indignation(Like reluctant). And even more I like the idea of implanting orders and controlling physiological reactions(Like orgasm and excitement). It sparks my own imagination:

You can make Jack produce several times more sperm when ejaculating. You can force one of the girls to lactate. You can arrange the perfect pet play or age play(But no diapers please). You can cause severe salivation and dripping of the pussy at the sight of the penis. Or profuse sweating. These body functions are mostly controlled by the brain. And considering that in the first chapter you promised a transformation, can go even further.

Femdom vibes look good, but I'm glad you're going to take control back to Jack. I hope he will pay back Abby for the manipulation attempt)

Looking forward to new chapters.

subalosubaloover 2 years ago

Love the series so far!

bubblebuttslutzbubblebuttslutzover 2 years ago

I can't wait to read more of this fantastic story @PTWrites ! There's nothing wrong with a sexually liberated friend slipping some harmless & sexy erotic mind control into the mix. Just because a woman is having some fun taking the lead for a while doesn't mean it's got to be the all pain & masochism. The kind of sexy woman who enjoys mind control with her friend is also the kind who likes getting dominated herself now & then. ;-)

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