All Comments on 'An Unusual Gift Ch. 07'

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PTWritesPTWritesabout 2 years agoAuthor

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Excellent! But not enough.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The thing with the dildo makes me wonder if the collar can cause actual physical changes given enough time. Like a second puberty or inducing lactation

Timtom12Timtom12about 2 years ago

It bugs me that Abby never had to bind the collar before Jack put it on after Ava. And Abby's commands are getting pretty bad, she needs to get locked down.

Being drunk and having that control with the collar is a pretty bad idea.

Timtom12Timtom12about 2 years ago

That said, I love the story and totally want more!

WargamerWargamerabout 1 year ago

Abby and Ava need to pay, bigtime.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor10 months ago

Its annoying that Jack didnt have any negative reaction to how Abby Betrayed her best friend. Nor did he recant the control she has over Ava. He just went to work. All he had to tell Ava was that she didnt obey anyone but him. I love MC stories. But I despise someone being forced to become against their sexual polarity.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

What happened to it having to stay on 12 hours, no more, no less?

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