All Comments on 'Anahita Ch. 01: Price Tag'

Almost an erotic Doctor Jekyll / Mrs. Hyde kind of thing. Not my usual, but it kept me reading. I'm sure I'd read a second part to see how far she can talk herself into going. Will this perverted part of her get a piercing or tattoo before she comes to her senses? Will she sabotage her normal self somehow, like throw away all her bras? Lots of interesting possibilities!

Currently working on a Part 2, though not sure yet how it will end. Interesting idea about tattoos, though.

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Excellent. You have opened a lot to explore: her transformation, her genius/superpower, her sexual awakening. It’s all done with a rich internal conflict. Looking forward to a long serial.

It's been fun but also quite difficult to write Anahita. I've submitted a Ch. 02, but haven't planned a Ch. 03 yet.

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Yes! Give us more lol.

Interesting and interested. Great premise and the characters nicely brought to life in the story ......I think you have lots of options for this story and it could explore several different paths as she grows in her sexuality ....... keep writin!!!!!😀🎉👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼