All Comments on 'Anahita Ch. 01'

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Want more! This is so well written, and it has been left at a very tantalising point. Please continue the story ... soon!

really really good work looking forward to more of this for sure

Love your work. I noticed you haven't written anything in awhile. I hope your still working on stories! Would love to see a 2nd part to this!

You should really.continue this story. So much pent up passion between these two

. This can't be their only adventure.

This story is best understood as following from Lucky with the Landlords, in which Danny has brief flings with Wendy and then Sharon. This in turn happens after Danny's relationship with Shanita sours when Shanita has an affair with Angelo in A Vacation to Remember. As for this story, it is carefully constructed and well-written, but it does need to be finished, as the reader is left wondering how all this story will continue, and, indeed, how this relationship eventually sours for Danny and Anahita. For this reviewer, the Anahita story is the last one in the Danny/Charmaine saga before Danny and Charmaine finally get together for good. That story, Reunion_Charmaine & Danny, is strongly recommended here, in order bring to conclusion this truly epic saga.