All Comments on 'Anal Nurse Ch. 03'
by britisha_luvs_anl
- 11 Comments
Anonymousabout 19 years agoOne their own, the three authors are incredibly talented; when they collaborate, as thay have here, LOOK OUT!!! Waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter!
laura_manusabout 19 years agoare supplied by this fantastic series! The three ladies co-authoring this piece blow my freakin' mind!
Anonymousabout 19 years agoAyeeee, Great, quick story, I've gotta go read the foreshadowing now! Thanks!
Anonymousabout 19 years agoDid you read any of the other comments?? The other comments, including this one, give the story and writer the HIGHEST MARKS; you though, ahve to be the one arsehole disenter, as I suppose there must always be one in the bunch. If the authors read this, I hope they keep doing things EXACTLY as they are; as for you, SIMPLE SIMON(A)...BUGGER OFF!
britisha_luvs_anlabout 19 years agoAuthorI appreciate all comments and feedback, that is INSTRUCTIVE/HELPFUL/CONSTRUCTIVE; although this person chose not to leave their name, I would be interested to know how many stories HE/SHE have published, before trying to tear us down.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoThe story reads too much like an Outline. Their are glaring omissions. The sex is hot but the story is very disjointed. You see this because you keep leaving ending comments that explain things that should have been in the story. The Intimitation sequence would have been great between 2-3 instead of straight too the the sex on part 3. a part 2a would be great. I see improvement and hope it continues.
Great Story Line Keep up the good work.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThe title says it all. I knew what was going to happen before I got to chapter 3. Try something original with your next series.
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