by BigOcticornEnergy
Very nice. no unpleasant surprises. Compact and well written. Keep writing and posting.
That was very, very good! It doesn't have to be long to be erotic. I thought you did an excellent job! Found it listed as a favorite in a comment left on one of my stories. I need to pay more attention to that path.
I loved the way you brought me into your mind and feelings without having to use a lot of dialog or scene-setting. Again, I feel it was top-notch!