All Comments on 'Anathema: The Story of Lindie'

I wasn't always sure I wanted to read more, but I could not stop myself. Nice job!

overall really enjoyed the story and i like you write and will look to read other things you write. A great story arc and tying pieces together--at least until the end. when i got to the end without finding out what Sarah knew or more info on Lindie--it was almost like a page was missing or you got tired or could not find a way out. With Lindie trying to figure out what she was, etc. being a theme throughout the story, it was more than a little irritating/disappointing to just abandon that without any closure.

I've started writing more about Lindie and Randy, with a focus on Randy's background. Lindie's sister will be more complicated.

I appreciate the feedback. It shows someone cares, and inspires me to write more, and write better. Thank you.

One of the anonymous comments was titled "captivating". Shit yeah. I know you plan to take a break, but this needs more, more, more

Yes, I have more of Lindie for you. And more of Sarah. Randy also has a story to explore, although not up to par with Lindie's colorful past.

This is a hobby, after all. I'm apparently riding too close to the edge on some of my material, as illustrations have been rejected for depicting characters as a little too young, or my werewolf looking a little too real (bestiality concern). So, back to the drawing board as it were. I'm trying hard to present a story that has some light to it, but all that comes is dark, nasty, and almost demented. Rob Zombie would be proud.

My eyes are burning for reading through this story at one go, staring at my monitor. This has to be the best fantasy erotic story i have read since joining the site. All I can say is thank you and I hope the author keeps on writing.

Please take a look at Anathema II: The Second Act and let me know what you think!

To complete your stories the monsters need to take shape on the page.

True horror awaits.