by buckneckid2000
*****Another great Part to this very entertaining series. Thanks for sharing.
wowowwo what a writer,, I absolutely love the story and the graphic sex you being to the table
Thank you
Looking forward to your next chapter
Wish I was on your cruise..
Rick is certainly encountering some sexual freaks - but, I LOVE it.
I'm along for this ride as long as it lasts.
5 stars! (Because higher numbers aren't allowed.
Dr beulahthebrit; Oh, how I love this story, the people are just great and as for the sex, well - WOW
Well, the first 4-5 chapters were good, then the writing fell apart, character development went out the window, and the plot disappeared. 3-stars and going nowhere fast.
Like your story ... but ... now its just way too much sex ... found I was skipping over sections and sections of sex. Could have skipped about 3 out of 4 sex filled pages. Stub your toe - have a threesome! Need more of the story line to really continue or more readers will fall by the wayside. Just my humble opinion.
Every day I wake up with another idea for a story, just can not seem to get them onto paper. Glad you are putting some of your thoughts to paper.