All Comments on 'And Little Geraldine Will Be Next Ch. 02'

someone shoot his balls off. Maybe you should do your own first just so you get the scene right

There are apparently all kinds of mouth breathers that seem to be frequenting this site now, people that seem to not quite understand that fantasy is fantasy. Ignore those fools and keep writing. The main character is not likeable, and the secondary characters are weak, and easily manipulated.. but what does this matter? It's a sex fantasy.

A nice twist I like that a lot I can hardly wait for chapter 3